Kadangarun Bariki Part 1 Complete By Mrs Sadauki
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. Chapter Summary and Overview
This segment explores the intense psychological and biological struggles of Basheer, a deeply religious 32-year-old Islamic scholar (Almajiri) who memorized the Quran in Maiduguri but is tormented by an overwhelming, uncontrollable sexual drive (muguwar sha'awa). Living in poverty with his protective mother (Inna), Basheer works a grueling job as a laborer lifting heavy bags of potatoes in the Maradi market.
The plot centers around Inna’s sudden decision to initiate marriage arrangements between Basheer and Badiya, a 19-year-old girl who sells food at the market and has long harbored a crush on him. It highlights themes of poverty, religious guilt vs. biological urges, parental desperation to steer a child away from secret sins, and the intense, dangerous boundaries of premarital temptation.
2. Comprehensive English Translation
The Midnight Guilt
The watch on his wrist—so worn with age that its original color could no longer be determined—indicated it was precisely twelve midnight.
Basheer adjusted his position on the bed, propping up his chin, which was covered in a thick, unkempt beard. He began closing his bloodshot eyes, heavy with intense desire, but sleep completely eluded him. Gradually, he began letting out deep sighs while his hand continuously rubbed his manhood, which had risen completely, standing rigidly erect and refusing to back down, desperately demanding its fulfillment.
For a long time, he continued to masturbate until he finally ejaculated. Instantly, a profound, heavy wave of useless regret washed over him. He desperately wanted to take a bath to cleanse himself, but the biting cold gripping the town wouldn't allow it. It wasn't until the first light of dawn that he braced himself to perform the ritual bath (Wankan Janaba).
As he stepped out of the bathroom holding his bucket, the bright beam of Inna's flashlight caught him squarely in its path. Like a hypocrite caught in a lie, he dropped the bucket to the ground. With a slightly trembling voice, he stammered, "Inna, you're awake already? They are just calling the dawn prayer now." Inna said absolutely nothing; she simply turned and walked back into her room. With a heavy, unnerved body, Basheer filled the plastic kettle, performed his ablutions, and headed to the mosque.
The Mother's Confrontation
By the time he returned home, the day had fully brightened. He found Inna sitting on her prayer mat, counting her prayer beads (casbi). He took a seat on the old wooden bench sitting in the parlor. Inna glanced at him, and he quickly slid down to the floor, greeting her respectfully, "Good morning, Inna. Did you wake up well?"
"Alhamdulillah!" she answered curtly, turning her face away, her expression hardening further.
Basheer drew a long, heavy breath and said, "Inna, please forgive me." Without looking at him, she asked, "Forgive you for what exactly?" He scratched his neck nervously and said, "Because you are upset with me."
She shook her head, turned to look directly at him, and said, "Basiru, whatever a person does, Allah sees him. Furthermore, He does not forbid something to mankind without providing its lawful (halal) alternative. I am not accusing you blindly, but you must fear Allah. You should fast frequently."
Basheer lowered his head in deep shame. In all his life, he had never felt the crushing weight of Inna's presence like he did today. In the past, she had frequently dropped subtle hints and indirect warnings (jirwaye mai kamar wanka) regarding his habits—noticing that he almost always had to take a full bath before the dawn prayer, and sometimes even before other prayers, whenever he isolated himself alone in his room. Realizing he had no intention of getting up, Inna rose and walked into one of the two adjacent rooms in the house. He watched her retreat, feeling a deep wave of pity for her. He knew with absolute certainty that if Inna had the financial means, she would have married him off long ago.
The Portrait of Basheer
Basheer Amadu was his full name—a 32-year-old young man. He was dark-skinned, heavily bearded, with a dense mat of hair covering his chest. He was tall and lean, yet possessed a commanding, robust masculine physique. A chronic lack of money hid his captivating, magical attractiveness and had left his skin looking weathered and dull.
Basheer was a deeply religious man who had successfully memorized the Holy Quran during his years as a wandering scholar (almajiri) in Maiduguri. Yet, despite this spiritual foundation, Allah had tested him with a fierce, ravenous libido that rose uncontrollably under any circumstance, completely consuming him whenever he found himself in isolation. His father had passed away before Basheer reached maturity, leaving his entire upbringing solely in the hands of Inna. Her lack of a profitable trade meant she couldn't afford his Western education; his Islamic education was obtained entirely through his time as an almajiri.
The Market and Badiya's Gesture
"Basiru? Basiru? Get up quickly, the sun is already high, yet you're still sleeping! Or are you not going to the market today either?" Inna called out, holding a small cup filled with hot millet gruel (kunu).
He stretched fully before stepping outside. Finding a piece of charcoal, he thoroughly scrubbed his teeth, washed his face, and came back inside to accept the gruel, swallowing it down quickly. "Today is market day, or have you forgotten?" Inna asked again. Basheer shook his head, "I know, Inna. I'm leaving right now." Annoyed, Inna snapped, "Then why are you still sitting there?" He looked at her quickly; this was the very first time she had ever raised her voice at him.
"The transport trucks don't arrive until ten o'clock, Inna. Even if I leave now, I'll just be sitting there waiting," Basheer said in a pouting, whiny tone, looking as if he were about to cry. Inna frowned and said nothing. Reluctantly, he left the house and headed toward the grand market of Maradi.
A twenty-minute walk brought him to the market. He headed straight to the offloading zone where the potato trucks parked; by all indications, they had just arrived. He greeted his coworkers before they began the grueling work of carrying the heavy sacks of potatoes deep into the market. Basheer would bend down, allow a massive sack of potatoes to be hoisted onto his back, and trudge forward, sweating profusely and panting heavily from the intense exertion.
From ten in the morning until well past noon, the brutal labor continued. Once they finished, the merchant (Alhaji), who was their boss, paid everyone. Basheer found a patch of shade and sat down, pouring cold water over his head, sighing with immense relief.
Badiya, who had been watching him intently from afar for a while, packed a food flask with rice and beans and brought it over to him. He smiled, accepting it, and remarked, "How much is this one? It looks much larger than what you usually give me. I'm only giving you 300 naira, young lady."
Badiya stared fixedly at his chest, which was heaving and expanding rapidly as he caught his breath. She replied softly, "No, today's meal is a free gift. After all, I've never done anything nice for you in your capacity as my older brother." Basheer, who had just stuffed his mouth with his first massive bite, opened his large eyes wide in surprise, staring at Badiya as she quickly turned and walked back to her food stall. After eating to his satisfaction, he returned the container to her, thanking her warmly before heading to a friend's shop inside the market.
Crude Advice and Marital Realities
"Look at the groom, smelling all fresh!" Basheer joked as he arrived at the shop, seating himself on a plastic chair.
Lawan frowned slightly and replied, "Don't call me a groom. You're the one who still refuses to come over and share a meal with the bride." Basheer smiled, "Once you guys finish the initial honeymoon phase, I will come by, by God's grace. I just hope my little sister isn't upset with me."
Lawan let out a heavy sigh, "Your sister? I'm already losing weight because of her! Whenever I try to initiate anything, she starts complaining that she's tired and that it hurts too much."
Basheer burst out laughing, "You villain! Are you torturing her? You know how greedy men can be; we don't take things slowly." Lawan gave him a playful glare, "It's been two weeks since the wedding, and we've only done it about five times!"
"Stop lying, my friend! Only five times?"
"You try it and see! She's incredibly spoiled. The moment she sees the ball is about to be kicked into play, she starts crying, and I am forced to leave her alone."
Basheer hissed loudly, "What total nonsense! If you keep doing that, how will she ever get used to it? This is entirely your fault. By God, if it were me, I would plug my ears tightly and plow right through her!" Lawan slapped him hard on the back, laughing, "Hey, we married for love! I absolutely cannot handle seeing her cry. Just tell me, what should I do?"
"Just ignore her tears when she starts crying. Make her endure it so you can fully enjoy your honeymoon, man. That's exactly how she'll get used to it," Basheer advised, pulling out a small wooden savings box (asusun) where he kept his money. Lawan nodded, "Alright, I'll try that. By the way, how is it going with the money you're supposed to take home?" Basheer nodded, "Yes, Inna told me to bring it today." They continued chatting for a while before Basheer finally headed home.
The Dowry Decisions
In the middle of the parlor, Inna had spread out her money, counting it systematically while Basheer ate leftover burnt rice (ƙanzo) that Inna had seasoned with oil, Maggi cubes, and onions.
"The money amounts to two hundred and ten thousand, plus this loose change," Inna announced after finishing her calculations. Basheer drank some water before adding, "And here is an additional 7,000 francs that I earned today." Inna took it, saying, "Excellent. Now, what we need to do next is take this money and pay your bride price." Basheer instantly broke into a violent coughing fit; he had absolutely not expected this sudden move from Inna.
"What is that cough for? Look, I have already made my final decision. We will allocate one hundred thousand for the dowry (sadaki), and the rest will be planned out for other expenses," Inna stated, looking directly at Basheer, who sat frozen as if he had seen a ghost.
"Inna, where on earth am I supposed to find a girlfriend? For Allah's sake, please drop this matter. I am not getting married now until I save up a massive amount of money so that everyone will praise the wedding."
Inna shook her head, "A child's beauty is in his youth, not his endurance! What nonsense are you talking, Basiru? You are a poor man; what business do you have trying to gather crowds or earn praise? And as for finding a bride, Badiya—the daughter of Iya who sells beans—is right there. She has loved you for a very long time anyway."
Basheer shifted uncomfortably, "Come on, Inna! How old is Badiya? She isn't a day over 19 years old. Is that the girl you want me to marry? And as for her loving me, no—it's just sisterly affection, there is absolutely no romance involved."
Inna smacked him over the head with a plastic cup, "When the marriage money is brought over, you go right ahead and accept her! That girl brings me food every single day just to win your favor. It was only yesterday that I advised her that you are the one she should be serving the food to, not me!"
Basheer stared at Inna with his mouth wide open in shock, "Oh! So that rice and beans she gave me today wasn't out of the goodness of her heart? Hmph! Well, I don't want her." The moment he finished speaking, he stood up and headed to his room, with Inna following closely behind him.
The Secret Sin
"Call your uncle for me; I want to speak with him," Inna commanded authoritatively. Basheer scowled, unplugged his old Nokia phone from the charger, pressed a few keys, and handed it to Inna. The moment the call was answered, she stepped away to speak in private.
Left alone, Basheer began pacing the room, thinking about the utter madness Inna was trying to force upon him. How could Badiya possibly satisfy a man like him? A girl who was literally born right in front of his eyes—was he really going to share a marriage bed with her? He let out a dark smile as he stroked his massive manhood, which, even while flaccid, was intimidatingly large—enough to terrify an experienced, fully grown woman, let alone a tiny girl like Badiya.
He hissed out loud, pulled off his shirt, and threw on a jalabiya. Stepping out, he filled a bucket with water and locked himself in the bathroom. The sudden thoughts of marriage had violently triggered his underlying lust. He reached his hand beneath his clothes, manipulating and squeezing his testicles. They had swollen heavily, while his shaft stood rigidly erect. He began stroking the head of his manhood, closing his eyes tightly as the image of Badiya's beautiful face flashed across his mind. In his mind, he fantasized intensely that she was the one stroking him.
He spent a long time stroking himself, rubbing it fiercely as if he were trying to tear it off, continuing until he violently ejaculated. He immediately ducked down and began performing the ritual bath in a panicked rush, hearing Inna loudly shouting his name outside. The water wasn't even enough to use soap properly, so he merely rinsed his bathing sponge quickly to prevent Inna from becoming suspicious.
The moment he stepped out, Inna locked her eyes onto him. She had spent over thirty minutes on the phone with his uncle, who had called her back after Basheer's credit ran out. Standing in the sunlight, Basheer set down his soap basket, leaning it slightly so the wet sponge could drain out, maintaining a totally straight face to avoid giving any room for suspicion.
"Are you finished with the call?" he asked, setting the bucket down.
"Yes, we're done. He said he will come the day after tomorrow, by God's grace, so we can settle everything and finalize it," Inna said, handing him back his phone.
He checked it and said, "Inna, you completely drained all my airtime." She shrugged, "Who else are you going to call with it anyway, since you claim you don't have a girlfriend?" Saying nothing, he retreated back into his room.
The Formal Proposals
Two days later, Uncle Laminu—the younger brother of Basheer's late father—arrived. He gave Basheer a severe lecture before adding, "Everything you see your mother doing is for the sake of your future. Basiru, look at yourself carefully. You are fully grown, ماشاء الله (Mashallah). If you were living in the village, you would have a teenage daughter by now. Your mother is completely aware of the state you are in; she is merely maintaining a dignified silence (kawaici) because as a mother, she cannot openly discuss these things with you. But now that Allah has blessed you to save up some money, we must go and pay your dowry." Basheer quickly lowered his head, burning with intense embarrassment.
After the evening (Magrib) prayer, Uncle Laminu walked over to Badiya's family home. After greeting her father, he stated the purpose of his visit. Badiya's father cleared his throat and said, "Well, there is no problem at all. You can bring your dowry, but before that, I must ask the girl herself to see if she consents."
Uncle Laminu replied, "That's perfectly fine. Whenever you are ready, we will bring the dowry money, by God's grace."
Iya (Badiya's mother), who had been eavesdropping from behind the curtain, rushed into the room, interjecting loudly, "The girl consented a long time ago! I already asked her, especially since Basheer's mother came here earlier today!"
Although Badiya's father was deeply annoyed by his wife's unrefined interruption, it didn't stop him from saying, "Masha Allah! Well, there you have it. Even if you are ready right now, you can bring whatever amount Allah has enabled you to afford." With that settled, the uncle returned home and briefed Inna on the successful meeting with Badiya's parents.
"He is a truly honorable man (Dattijon Arziki). He has never demanded an exorbitant, fixed dowry for any of his daughters, which is precisely why I was so eager to unite our lineages," Inna said, wiping away a small tear of joy.
She handed all the money over to Uncle Laminu. He extracted 100,000 naira for the formal dowry and handed the remaining balance back to her, advising, "This is for the dowry. Use the remaining balance to buy food items and new clothes for her. As for the house they will live in, I will personally pay for a full year's rent." Inna countered, "Oh, I thought they would live right here with us, and we could just break open a separate doorway leading outside."
The uncle shook his head, "No, don't do that. It is far better for them to live in their own separate space." As they continued mapping out the wedding arrangements, Basheer sat silently in his room, listening to every single word.
The Injustice at the Construction Site
The following day, it seemed like a dream when the marriage money was formally delivered to Badiya's family. Upon hearing the news, Badiya was so overcome with absolute joy that she literally started dancing. The wedding date was set exactly three months away, during the upcoming harvest season (kaka). Basheer had never envisioned his marriage happening this way, but he had no choice. In his heart, he made a silent vow that he would provide Badiya with a massive, high-end bridal trunk (akwati mai taya), just like any other modern bride, even if it had to happen after the wedding.
Today was Wednesday. Early in the morning, Basheer headed to the construction site (chantier), as was his usual routine twice a week (working only on days that didn't conflict with the bi-weekly Monday and Friday Maradi market days). Upon his arrival, he found the laborers already mixing mud and mortar. He stripped out of his clean clothes and changed into his work gear, which was entirely caked in cement.
He took up a heavy wooden head-pan used for carrying wet concrete and began his grueling manual labor. He worked the entire day without a single moment of rest, stopping only briefly to eat.
Right before evening (Magrib) prayer, the laborers washed themselves down, and their supervisor (Oga) began distributing their daily wages. However, the moment the supervisor handed out the money, everyone’s face soured.
Basheer turned the 2,000-franc note over in his hand before confronting the man, "Oga, why is it 2k today instead of the usual 3k?"
The supervisor hardened his face, "Yes, the situation dictates it. You guys barely did any real work today; it was all just endless talking."
Basheer’s anger instantly flared to his throat, "But Oga, this is completely unfair! Everyone knows manual labor is 3k everywhere, and some sites even pay 4k just to avoid cheating people out of their hard work!"
Infuriated, the supervisor snapped, "Basheer, are you raising your voice at me? For how many years have I been giving you work? Have I ever cheated you before? The very first time I reduce it by a mere 1k, you start insulting me? Fine, get out of here. As of today, you are fired. I no longer need your services!"
Instantly, reality hit Basheer. He snapped out of his anger and began desperately apologizing to the supervisor, begging for his job back, but the man completely ignored him, stepped into his car, and drove away.
Basheer let out a furious, defeated sigh before walking home. A single glance from Inna was all it took for her to realize her son was in deep distress. "My last-born, what's wrong? Who upset you?" Inna asked tenderly, trying to soothe him. Basheer simply collapsed into her lap and burst into heavy tears like a woman.
"Why us? Why did we have to be born poor, Inna? I am constantly struggling, hustling every single day to make money, yet nothing changes. Why does every minor boss feel entitled to humiliate and abuse us just because we are poor? Now, Inna, for God's sake, my hard-earned rights have been trampled upon, and I don't even have the right to complain?" Basheer cried bitterly.
"Who trampled on your rights?" Inna asked. Basheer recounted the entire altercation with their supervisor.
"He is completely in the wrong for doing that. But what drove you to speak up when you weren't the only laborer there? Don't worry, let me go personally and speak to Salihu; I know he will take you back."
Basheer wiped his tears and said, "You really need to go, honestly. Look at me—the wedding is right around the corner, and now I don't even have a steady job." Inna shook her head, privately marveling at how, all of a sudden, every second sentence out of Basheer’s mouth revolved around his upcoming marriage.
The Threshold of Temptation
He took a bath before eating a delicious meal of Jollof pasta that Inna had prepared. Once finished, he headed over to Badiya’s house for their evening chat. Their daily conversations usually consisted of simple, repetitive small talk—asking about each other's day, health, and their market business.
She leaned down slightly to set down a metal cup filled with water. Basheer kept stealing glances downward, his eyes locked onto her heavily endowed chest, which completely filled out her dress. Because the courtyard lacked electricity and was pitch black, Badiya failed to notice the dark, heated intensity in Basheer's expression. They continued their casual chat, and she kept giggling naively.
By now, his voice had begun to crack and grow raspy from pure, mounting lust, while the front of his trousers had swollen into a massive bulge.
He cleared his throat hoarsely and said, "Bad-baby... I think I should probably head home."
She pouted, "For real? For Allah's sake, are you already feeling sleepy? When I'm with you, I never want to sleep. I feel like I could spend the entire night right here."
Basheer’s eyes went wide, "Young lady, if you did that, I would make you cry because I wouldn't be able to control myself or leave you alone."
Being a girl who grew up hawking food around commercial transport parks, she instantly understood the heavy sexual undertone of his words. In a soft, seductive, sing-song voice, she teased, "Well, we would just have to make each other cry then! Don't look at yourself thinking you're some massive giant; you might just find out that I can handle you."
The raw delivery of her words sent a massive, violent throb straight through his manhood. He felt a sudden, electric sensation rushing through his veins.
Overwhelmed, Basheer jumped to his feet, feeling an intense, painful ache gripping his lower abdomen. Badiya quickly reached out and grabbed his hand to stop him from leaving, accidentally bumping her foot against the chair in the process. She pleaded, "My brother, for Allah's sake..."
Before she could even finish her sentence, he slammed his lips directly onto hers...
3. Structural & Cultural Themes
- The Almajiri Contrast: The text highlights a stark psychological contrast. Basheer is a Hafiz (someone who has fully memorized the Quran), yet he faces a near-addictive struggle with masturbation and high libido. This captures the human vulnerability behind religious devotion.
- The Mother's Intuition (Kawaici): In Hausa culture, Kawaici represents a dignified, respectful reserve. Inna knows exactly why Basheer is constantly taking full ritual baths (Wankan Janaba) before dawn, but out of maternal modesty, she uses indirect hints (jirwaye mai kamar wanka) and pushes for marriage as the lawful cultural solution.
- Economic Vulnerability: The sudden drop in wages from 3,000 to 2,000 francs and the subsequent firing highlights the precarious nature of daily wage labor in West African markets, adding extreme financial panic to Basheer's impending marriage.